Here it is now with a little advice from Sam and Ryan. I have a horrible memory, so I probably forgot to implement 90% of what they told me. Besides, I need to move on and stop being so nit-picky. All I can say is that I can't stand the airbrush in Painter.
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Barry, this is shows a LOT of improvement. You ought to feel pretty good about this. The value range is much better. The highlights are a little bright making him look shiny. The light should probably spread out more. But good job, man.
I agree the highlights are so bright they distract from the eyes and overall face area. But that is just zooming in on the face, the painting as a whole is great. I like the simple composition.
The new colors are much more interesting. There are still a couple hot spots of contrast that pull the eye away from the face, but overall it's really good.
its nice to see you gettihng into da colors!!
Really cool, Barry. I haven't seen your work before. You avalanche guys are something else...
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